BOOK I: THE FAILURE CONDITION (Chapters 1-5)
Damn, this is good...
Tony, thank you…I am critical of myself for cutting too much out in seeking the 750-word sweet spot per chapter.
It is maddening expanding out of the flash fiction mode.
Chapters 6-10 should have a bit more textures and contours to provide the reader more insight into the world.
Damn, this is good...
Tony, thank you…I am critical of myself for cutting too much out in seeking the 750-word sweet spot per chapter.
It is maddening expanding out of the flash fiction mode.
Chapters 6-10 should have a bit more textures and contours to provide the reader more insight into the world.